Sunday, November 6, 2011

I Fear (Part 2)

these are my final designs for the anorexia poster. i played around with the text alignments, font size and text positions and came up with 2 versions.

Version 1:

Version 2:

i edited according to the feedbacks from my classmates. Version 1 was edited based on a suggestion from a classmate to shift all the text downwards because the picture will capture attention first before directing all the information below. However, i felt that the clustering of the text at the bottom of the poster will not be effective in communicating the messages. People will not read all the text when they are clustered together. The lack of a 'Title/Heading" on the top makes the design incomplete as well. Thus, i came up with Version 2 where I decided to shift the text upwards instead. so that there will be a presence of title/heading for the poster. An impactful slogan is then added at the bottom to complete the design. (gives an ending to the design)
I'm trying to use text to frame my design here. so personally, i prefer Version 2! (:

My final design is version 2.


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